2012-04-27

Chapter 5

This is the sweetest thing I have ever seen in my life he spent his money on a Cartier love bracelet for me? Actually, Something tells me he's really honest! Is it time for me to confess my love to him? I have to text him, 3eeb lw I didnt.

(R) Latifa: Nawaf, thankyou so much for the bracelet, I love it! Bs I think we have to talk. Call me?

Nawaf: Okay, sure!

*Nawaf calling*

I answer, "Ahlan Nawaf, keefik?"
Nawaf: "7mdella, great you?"
Me: "Awesome, marra thankyou for the bracelet I loved it, kent ab3'aha mn awal."
Nawaf: "Shda3wa, its nothing, I could have done more..."
Nawaf: "Listen L6eefa, I know enni 6'ayagtek, and your not sharing the same feeling that I have for you. I'm sorry, 5ala9 I'll get off your back, oo mara7 abtherek."
He's killing me with these words! 
me: "Shd3wa, abadan ma abthartini, oo who told you thel 5arabee6."
Nawaf: "What do you mean by 5arabee6."
me: "Nawaf listen dont take this the wrong way, bs I Lo-"
I heard a scream that pierced my ears, I went down flying. suddenly I saw my mother on the ground crying! "MAMA WSH FEEKKK???" I still hear Nawaf on the phone asking "ESH FEE ESH FEEKUM??" I fell on the ground, my knees too weak to left me, I threw my hands around my mother and started crying without knowing whats happening. I know this is wrong, but I didnt have enough time to hang up on Nawaf. She started screaming! "FAISAL WLEDI FAISAL!!" I almost had a heart-attack when I heard this! "MAMA WSH FEE FAISAL??" She shook me and told me to call the driver while crying hysterically! THE DRIVER ISNT HERE WHERE IS HE? I realized that Nawaf's still on the phone! I lift my phone to my ear shaking! "Nawaf, I'll call you back!" his voice was shaking! "LA I'M ON MY WAY TO YOUR HOUSE!" He hung up! "Mama, Mafy sawag and Nawaf ygoul he's taking us" i said exhaustingly. She didnt have time to argue. Nawaf came and flew us to the hospital. Mama told us that Faisal had an accidant with our cousin and the guy said he's dead and our cousin's in a comma bs we didnt believe him.
Things can change in a blink of an eye, one moment I'm enjoying my cartier bracelet, the next I'm crying over my what I'm told a dead brother!

While we were waiting in the hall my mother sitting next to me and Nawaf geddamna, He saw the bracelet in my hand and smiled a bit. I would have smiled back but I'm seriously not in the mood. I put my head on mama's shoulder and cried untill I'm asleep. I think I slept for a long time because Nawaf woke me up and my mother wasnt next to me. His eyes were puffed up from crying. Aw, thats cute. Still not in the mood for his cuteness or he's cute british accent. He told me everything, that it was my brother who's in a comma not my cousin, my cousin is dead! I looked at him in the eyes and started crying hysterically again, I need a hug so I just reached for his shoulder and cried on it. I know this was 100% wrong, but he was the only one there to give me a hug. He was shocked for a second, he didnt know what to do, then I feel his arms rap around me. "I need to go to the toilet" I wipe my tears with my sleeves. stood up. "are you sure your okay? do you need anything?" I look at him sypethatically. "You've been enough help already. Thankyou, Nawaf... for everything."

I return back with all my aunts crying next to my mother. I scan the hall for Reema and Noura. There they were standing with eyes as noses as red and puffy as tomato, talking to the doctor. They were pretty much the only ones talking to the doctor, every one was too exhausted for another bad news.
Salman's mother, my dead cousin, alla yr7ma, was crying untill she fell down and blacked out. The nurse and the doctor took her in a private room to rest. His father was in a shock, litrally. shocked! He didnt speak, He didnt ask, he didnt cry, just stood there still. Untill he bursts out with tears. He fell on his knees and cried, "ALLA YR7AMEK, SALMAN! YOU WERE A GOOD KID!" He went thru a hyestericall phaze! The doctor gasu 6'a3'6a oo sukkara! I remebered my mother, I ran to her flying and I started crying on her knees. "Nawaf, come take Latifa, noura, and Reema home." she told Nawaf while she was crying her eyes out. "What? No! Abi ag3d ma3ak mama!" Reema and Noura took my hand and looked at me like there was no time for an argument. I understood oo I stood up.

Reema and Noura were in the backseat to comfort me. Theyre good friends, actually best friends! 6ool el6ereg w ana a9ee7. "L6eefa, at this point. Faisal doesnt need your cries. Y7taj ennik td3eenla! Alla ygwma bessalama oo yer7am salman yarab oo yda5la fasee7 jannaata!" All of the car started crying again, "AAMEEN AAMEEN!"
I went home took a shower and cried my eyes out! Noura and Reema are sleeping over. This is definitely not the fun sleepover! Reema told Nawaf to sleep in Faisal's room because theyre house is empty and that their parents are in the hospital. he argued at first but then he agreed. Everyone slept but me! How could I sleep! o5ooy been el7ayat oo elmout! I went lel9ala were Faisal, Nawaf and I played fifa! I sobbed and sobbed untill my vision became blurry. Nawaf stepped out of the room and looked at me. The moment he looked at me, he teared up.
"Off, how I hate seeing you like this!" he sounded sad and sincere. Since that day I decided to trust him.
"Nawaf take me to the hospital! PLEASE!" I started sobbing again. "Shh, dont cry, I'll take you yalla." I fell for an angel.

4 comments:

  1. a tip when writting , always separate the dialogue from the rest of the story, ex.(from this chapter):
    He was shocked for a second, he didnt know what to do, then I feel his arms rap (wrap*) around me.
    "I need to go to the toilet" I wipe my tears with my sleeves. stood up.
    "are you sure your okay? do you need anything?" I look at him sypethatically.

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  2. is this story real?

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    1. No, this is all in my head. Only a piece of my imagination.

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